Guccihildes post published October 1 “Paint´n sip” is about drinking wine and painting at the same time. The author writes about new amusement instead of going out and drinking in a bar or a club.
At the beginning of the text, we didn’t get enough clarification that “Paint´n sip” is, something like courses or activity. The author writes that you can book time and come to draw, but does not specify that there are a few places for this activity. Therefore, it seems to me that the last paragraph could be switched with the first one. In this case the meaning of “Paint´n sip” would be clear.
Guccihildes writes a lot about the concept, so the readers can clearly understand what the activity contains. We understand how the activity goes – what kind of material we get, if there are any instructors, and what we generally get out of the course.
The first paragraph seems a bit commercial, and looks like the author tries to sell this activity in his or her blog. On the other hand, this paragraph shows why the author is interested in “Paint´n sip” concept and decides to write about it. He or she personally thinks the concept is great and worth to talk about, also gives an advice how to spent your free time in different way.
All in all, the blog post contains everything needed about “Pant´n sip”, the readers understand the concept.
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